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I love typography by mindCollision I love typography by mindCollision

Soooooo this is an attempt at something new for me :)
I realise similar ideas have been done before, so it's not the most original of typography works I guess, but it's something I wanted to try.

I'd appreciate any critique from other artists more experienced in this area :)

stocks: ~Babybird-Stock ~darkrose42-stock, and brushes by ~Osiris2735

Featured on designlicious.tumblr.com, beautifulmac.com, psdfan.com, designjuices.co.uk, junkiee.net & 1stwebdesigner.com.
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:iconpica-ae:
A very appealing piece of Typography :heart:
I love the colors, the concept and the layout. The Chalkboard background and pink color go together very well and make this deviation very pleasant to look at.

Still i see some place for improvement. The heartshape, even if it's not a piece of typography is s a bit too simple in my opinion. Now i don't know how they were done technically but my tip would be to draw them as paths in illustrator and add some preset brush that will make them look more like drawn with chalk.
To go into typographic detail, i would adjust the kerning between the letters and give them some more space, while reducing the kerning at the y's. That will give the type a more even look.
I am not a big fan of so big drop shadows either, you could reduce their size and opacity and still get the effect without it being so distracting.

I tried to give you constructive criticism to help you make this already beautiful piece of art even better. It does look like a lot of critique, but i hope it will help you improve :)

cheers,
`pica-ae :peace:
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:iconhiepnh:
HiepNH Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Nice! Share me brushes plzz Giggle 
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:iconraeuberstochter:
raeuberstochter Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014   Digital Artist
love the colours!
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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:iconxspydarex:
xspydarex Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Wow
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
?
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:iconparvez430:
parvez430 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
hey please make a tutorial please please
i want to know how to create effect like this in photoshop
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't really have the time at the moment to make a tutorial, I don't have a lot of free time :( but maybe some day I will get round to it :hug:
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:iconvhcrow:
VHCrow Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Harabara is an amazing font! Great Job
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks very much :D
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:iconkentewster:
kentewster Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
i love it too
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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:iconmimsyborogoves001:
mimsyborogoves001 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011
Love it
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks a lot! :D
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:iconfazhiionztar:
fazhiionztar Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
WAA I LOVE IT ^^YOU ARE COOL!!
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol thank you very much! Much appreciated :)
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:iconpatricck:
Patricck Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Student
great effect
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much :D
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:iconyozg:
yozG Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011
:bow: :bow:
Could you please tell my the name of that font? :P
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yes it's Harabara, you can get it on dafont.com for free :)
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:iconyozg:
yozG Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2011
thank you very much!
great work ;)
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome, and thanks, glad you like it :)
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:iconmusemindcontrol:
MuseMindControl Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This has simple colors yet it still looks amazing. :O

Can I ask what font this is?
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much :D
It's Harabara, edited a bit. You can get it for free on dafont.com :)
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:iconmusemindcontrol:
MuseMindControl Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
your welcome!
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:icondee0907:
Dee0907 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2011
Hi! Im new here. Im having trouble in using this.. Can you help me? Btw, I love the color and the font you used. :)
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, I'm glad you like it.
What exactly are you having trouble with?
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:iconzenjelly:
zenjelly Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
Well this caught my eye and I think it's absolutely beautiful work. A prime example of the beauty of simplicity. Well done.
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much :D I did try to add more to it, but nothing seemed to fit, I think it works just as it is, so I'm glad you agree :aww:
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:iconjunkieenet:
junkieenet Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This awesome artwork was featured in our blog :D
60 Inspiring Typography Designs: [link]
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much, I really appreciate that :D
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:iconjunkieenet:
junkieenet Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're most welcome :D
We changed the link [link]
Sorry for the inconvenience!
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Lol it's no problem :)
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:iconel-cadejos:
El-Cadejos Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
simple but very classy, congratz!

razz
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks man :D
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:iconmimix-art:
Mimix-art Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2010
Magnifique.................................
bonjour de Paris France
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Merci beaucoup :D I'm glad you like it :aww:
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:iconjifes:
jifes Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2010
Hi MC, what font did you use for the typography logo? do you you know where I can download it?

Great work!
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hi there, the font is called "Harabara" and you can download it free here [link]
Glad you liked the work :aww:
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:iconthe-way-to-go:
the-way-to-go Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010
i <3 this. :D
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much, I'm really glad you do :D
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:iconxeptoc:
xeptoc Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010
like it ! pink & black suite the best :kitty:
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah I think it makes the text really pop out doesn't it? Glad you like it :hug:
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:iconxqlusiveevan:
xQlusiveEvan Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010
feautured @ beautifulmac.com
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much! That's awesome :D I'm sorry to be picky, but du think you could maybe post a link under it to the page it's on?
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:iconschledde:
schledde Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010
reaaally good :)!
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks very much :D :hug:
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:iconarifismyname:
Arifismyname Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
your design featured here [link]
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much :D
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:iconarifismyname:
Arifismyname Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
welcome bro...indeed im feeling very proud to feature ur work...its really amazing design
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:iconmindcollision:
mindCollision Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's very nice of you to say. I'm flattered :D :hug:
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