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I love typography by mindCollision I love typography by mindCollision

Soooooo this is an attempt at something new for me :)
I realise similar ideas have been done before, so it's not the most original of typography works I guess, but it's something I wanted to try.

I'd appreciate any critique from other artists more experienced in this area :)

stocks: ~Babybird-Stock ~darkrose42-stock, and brushes by ~Osiris2735

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:iconpica-ae:
A very appealing piece of Typography :heart:
I love the colors, the concept and the layout. The Chalkboard background and pink color go together very well and make this deviation very pleasant to look at.

Still i see some place for improvement. The heartshape, even if it's not a piece of typography is s a bit too simple in my opinion. Now i don't know how they were done technically but my tip would be to draw them as paths in illustrator and add some preset brush that will make them look more like drawn with chalk.
To go into typographic detail, i would adjust the kerning between the letters and give them some more space, while reducing the kerning at the y's. That will give the type a more even look.
I am not a big fan of so big drop shadows either, you could reduce their size and opacity and still get the effect without it being so distracting.

I tried to give you constructive criticism to help you make this already beautiful piece of art even better. It does look like a lot of critique, but i hope it will help you improve :)

cheers,
`pica-ae :peace:
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HiepNH Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014
Nice! Share me brushes plzz Giggle 
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raeuberstochter Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2014   Digital Artist
love the colours!
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mindCollision Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :D
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xspydarex Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2012
Wow
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mindCollision Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
?
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parvez430 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012
hey please make a tutorial please please
i want to know how to create effect like this in photoshop
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mindCollision Featured By Owner May 30, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't really have the time at the moment to make a tutorial, I don't have a lot of free time :( but maybe some day I will get round to it :hug:
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VHCrow Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Professional Interface Designer
Harabara is an amazing font! Great Job
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mindCollision Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks very much :D
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kentewster Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
i love it too
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